• lime!@feddit.nu
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    1 month ago

    your writing overall is good! it’s just a matter of information priority.

    here’s a tip, dunno how applicable it is but i use it when writing technical documentation:

    for each step, explain to yourself why you’re doing it the way you are. if it turns out you caused the step to be needed, rather than it being required, you probably need to rethink, or at least add the explanation to the text.

    • eric@lemmy.caOP
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      1 month ago

      That’s a good tip. Thanks. I think I might tweak the existing posts for readability.